This song is very good. But its to long...
I feel that it was good, but it could have been better. There just needed to be more. Maybe add a bass part? Just something that makes it sound fuller.
It had a really nice beat, and the hi-hats really carried the song.
Normally, I'm not a big fan of just bringing in an instrument, then after a few bars, bring in another, but this time, it worked. Maybe this was because you started off with the loudest instrument, I'm not really sure.
One thing that bothered me was the ending. It essentially just cut off. This would be OK if it was a loop, but it wasn't, and it didn't work.
I think this would work well in a game, , and I wouldn't be surprised if it ends up in one
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What I most enjoyed was how the song progressed. It increased in complexity and intensity as it played on, and that was a really nice touch.
I found the song overall to flow very nicely and while it seemed a bit generic in some areas, it built itself up slowly and was a real treat to listen too.
I suggest you work on improving where you place certain beats and turn down the volume just a little bit.
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To me, this song possesses a very intellectual sound. The fragmented rhythm of the hi-hat is really what stuck out as the most focal point of this song, even above the lead melody. -While it fit with the song as a whole, it seemed to grind against the melody and give me a bit of an uneasy feeling. That's not a bad thing per say, I actually found it to be quite interesting...
The melodies were interesting and original and the song transitioned fairly well without sounding too chopped up.
Overall, I see this as a mellow tune with a very deep and almost dark sound. Nice work!
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