As ThisGuy777 said,it does have amazing potential
Quite good song,though it's merely one step towards greater music skills,which equals better songs,it's still awesome :D
This melody is awesome but I cant help but get the feeling that its missing something....Real nice job! Keep it up
Keep going man
This is actually nice man, i like the melody alot:D, the instruments and the percussion could've been better.
But keep going man, it could use better mastering some places too