I Really like the synths you used but the drums were kind of lacking. I wish you would have passed it through some equalization at parts. IE low/high band pass filters. Usually drum and bass tends to be heavier but you did pretty good without overload on the synths. You have some potential and i might look at some more of your work later.
Thanks for the review mate, and I will take your tips, and use them! =D
a bit repetitive and simple but enough to be bearable i think its an exceptional first submision good job
Thanks for the reply =)
So I need my songs to be less repetetive. Gotchya ;)