Well, I can barely hear the guitars, the drums need some equalizing, the singing is really not that great (no offense), and where's the bass? The whistling is too sharp and keeps clipping. The lyrics are really not that great either. But it's not that bad for doing in just 2 hours. If you're serious about writing anything at all, even if it's supposed to be a comedy song, take a few extra hours and work on the production, and it'd be worth listening to.
Finally an honest opinion lol. But ya I actually fixed up the song and lyrics, I just havent gotten to re-recording it yet. Plus I only have a 5 dollar mic originally used for counterstrike and a cheap video camera for recording so the drums aren't gonna get equalized anytime soon lol. But thanks for the opinion