I imagine a clock day music video. SBC with his friends dancing! Oh, man you are a genious!
The fella below me was brutally blunt.
To be honost though this song does need a LOT of work. You got some good concepts going here but your choices of instruments are kinda annoying to listen to. Ya just need to sit down and mix and match. You seem to know how to make a rythem and some melody. Use those talents to your advantage. Yo'll get it eventually! Keep writing music brutha!
Im sorry to say this but..
I hope you die in a fire(jus kiddin). There was very little creativity and it was boring and... It jus really suked(No offense). I gave you a 2 just because it would just be mean to give you a 1.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.