Ugh..
First of all, I love the melody.. Too bad it's not yours. Be sure to credit D-Block & S-Te-FaN next time :).
Sadly, that's the only good part about the track.
You used waaaay too many presets. Try to limit these as much as possible. I don't remember the name of the lead you used in Z3ta, but I'm sure it's a preset.
Next up is the kick. A hardstyle kick is supposed to be fluent, not distorted like fuck. It kills the whole lead, and it's a shame.
I recommend using Hydra for hardstyle kicks and basses.
Next time, try to make your own melodies, don't use too many presets, and make the kick more fluent.