Not Bad, but could use a bit of improvement

hmm, being an avid industrial listener i generally like industrial with a lot of heavy synth in it. This track wasn't bad for your first attempt at making an industrial track and was very consistent and flowed well. You do have talent, and i liked this piece better than your normal techno tracks. Keep up the good work

Original...witha Resident Evil sound!!

Hey!! Good work on this piece, I really like how it turned out!! I think this would go well with some sort vocals by Trent Reznor or something...
Although, it really does have a Resident Evil sound with the umm...well, not cowbell, but that pitch thingy!! It is still a DAMN good piece, and if it's no problem at all, I wanna download this and see if I can throw this in a game Im trying to make...ANYWAYS, yeah!! Here's a 10 for the music, and FUCK what that other guy said!! This is badass all in itself!! Keep up the good fuckin work!!

This would sound awesome live

WHile I was listening to this I pictured this being played live. and man, the guy playing the cow bell thing must be pretty fucking bored!! You should change that part up a bit. My favorite part of the song was when you sswitched from the drums playing with the cymbals to that really cool guitar low sounding..sound, hah. That was awsome. But man, that high pitched cow bell thing gets kinda annoying. I mean, it fits well but you have it through the ENTIRE song. I would suggest lowering the volume or something.
THE GUITAR WAS AWSOME!!