It's a nice little tune, but it's a touch too short and after a few repeats it gets annoying.
Here's why I think so.
Firstly, the end and beginning are not similar enough, there's a clear jump. You need to fix that.
The tune is good, but the backing doesn't have the depth needed to carry itself properly, it sounds a touch flat and very sythesised, which can grate after while.
The concept is good, however, you need better sound to carry it up properly. I'd advise you also make the backing more prominent, even with the speakers turned up I can't catch the finer details properly.
This song makes me feel as though I am in a place where a lost civilization use to be and now its been discovered and studied. It also makes me feel like I am wondering around an old dungeon that is abandoned. Fantastic job! Keep up the fantastic work!
Had this adventure feeling...
The song makes me feel as if I'm some explorer who just entered some ancient dungeon. And there I stood amazed at the unique architecture of the dungeon as it reveals like some sort of tomb or lost city.
Keep up the great work!
Thanks, I'll be sure to tell you when I make anything else. :)
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