Awesome.. You got there a pretty nice sound mate. But I think it's a bit soft for a heavy metal song... It also somewhat makes me remind a Metallica song, like N.E.M.
You have really progressed with your playing truly Ryan. This song is truly a masterpiece witch sounds to be your best to date. What I truly liked most about this song was the breakout around the end. I did not hear any sort of screw up or anything out of place in this song. Even the recording on the acoustic was amazingly recorded. Your hammer ons were decently slurred on with a great tone. This was truly a great job and sounds like you put alot of work and effort was put into this one man. Would love to hear more like this one Ryan. I'm also guessing this wasn't done on your Crate amp because it didn't have such a nice and crisp clear tone like this one.
I won't blame you if you decide to put this on your debut album.
this was perfect awesome job =D
I love songs that evolve over time. The breakout at the end was perfectly done. Hell, the whole song was perfect. What I really liked though, is it gave me this nostalgia trip of classic rock songs. It sounds like an epic ballad. Amazing stuff.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.