Your delivery continues to improve.
Nice hook too it was kinda catchy. Keep it up BN
Author Comments
beat by my boy Parth
(CHORUS)
Trick or treat?
Smell ma feet
leg end's weed
story time? sweet
or check ma sleeve
deal me heat
feel the beat
trick again or retreat?
So who's in on this?
Give up them ins
like what's out is finished
What's done is done
u aint' gon hit this
grimey son yeah 1
but where is the love?
u aint feelin it
must b lust
put it in first,
meanin above
hit it u must,
hit up wut was
regret is wut
the sober does
It cant b,
son not even a buzz
so u move on
fiendin for lust
this procces like pizza
but u w.o the crust
u stuck to the heat
said fuck, but thats wut it does
(but that's wut it does(fade out))
Broken-Needle responds:
thanks man, I got some ill shit comin no worries jus waiting for throat to clear up. I'd do em anyway, but I kinda like these tracks n jus wanna do em in 1 take, but gna write shit in the meantime, anyways
Keep it pimpin'
BN out
PS happy belated birthday man
Not bad...
I think this is alright for a couple minutes of work. The effect on the hook is interesting, I like it at the end when it fades and gets distorted. Dope jam bro, keep at it. peace
Broken-Needle responds:
lol the very end I only added cuz i was short a few seconds on soundclick to have this on the charts. I agree this is nice 4 a few mins o work, I personally like the way it turned out=D
yo!!!
i donr care what they say, i likr your flow bud! this is hot, the only thing is that its too short!
Broken-Needle responds:
=D thanks man, lol I only spent few mins on this, n the beat came short cuz I asked for it that way=D appreciate the love a lot man, thanks
Keep it pimpin'
BN out
cool
I like it. the voice just has some distortion that is creeping in. THe flanger feel could be just left to the chorus and the rest could be just normal. I like it.
A little dist in the bass too, i still like it tho
Broken-Needle responds:
ye the distortion goes hard on this, think it's from the bass. Lol all ma shit sounds soo much better when done live, but still glad you liked it=D and thanks 4 the review
Keep it pmpin'
BN out
its ight..
voice placement is off
Broken-Needle responds:
i think I agree sir, I'll re-do it if more ppl think so too
Credits & Info
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- Score
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3.75 / 5.00
- Uploaded
- May 14, 2009
- 10:17 PM EDT
- Genre
- Hip Hop - Modern
- File Info
- Song
- 1.3 MB
- 1 min 28 sec
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