the high pitched stuff didnt bug me so much.
this is a solid piece you have. not professional but not made by a noob.
it's pretty nice, i'd say improve the drum beat, that's it from me. a few of the drum samples aren't that great, i'd get some higher quality drums definately.
but please do make more.
Try to tune that super high pitched stuff down a bit and it'll make this pretty good
Great by the all but could do without all the super high stuff
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.