you incorportated the choir effects (etc) really well... like the guy below me said, this has the potential to be a killer intro track... where track two would contain shredding, blast beats, and insane tortured vocals.
only criticism is that it got a little repetitive... to cap it off, this really needed some kind of lead/solo work (or some kind of change-up) half to two thirds of the way through ... or, especially if it was used as an intro track, it could've just been shorter... without losing any of its awesomeness.
Hells gate INTRO WORTHY.... Scene 1[act]://1 Fire and abyss dying mortals all around with giant beasts!!! Damn this shit is sexy....
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.