Work on the details
Small detail but maybe every fourth "I've got to keep on going" in the beginning could have a longer "going" with the pitch lowered at the end? Maybe it's just my personal opinion but that's just what goes through my head, feel free to use it or ignore it. Anyway, good song maybe increase volume on the non-vocals and mix it up a bit. I won't vote because it would lower the rating, and I feel like this song has a lot of potential.