Well this is interesting.

This pretty cool. I like all the synths and melodies and stuff, but like the guy at the bottom said, I dunno if they fit together well. I also like the panning. It would deffinetely be better if you add a strong bassline underneath it all. When I listen to song on this site, a lot of times I feel like people forget about the fish. But that could just be me. Keep it up, I gave you a 5.

It's good

I see you have a techno style I cna respect that man. Feels like a dungeon theme from an RPG!

Nice Beat

and very cool synth.

Dont know how well the intro synth and the melody tones fit together. and same thing goes with the third synth you included.

mabey try adding a bass?

but really i dont know what kind of a song you want this to be? DnB?

6/10
3/5