Hey good chord arangement and all but this does feel kind of empty.. im going to take this and post it on a guitar forum im part of and get a few people to lay some solos over it if it turns out good ill post it back here for you
4/5 as a Bt
3/5 as a song
It's supposed to be a poppy rock song, with vocals.
But since I'm a horrible singer, I just left it as it is :)
This piece is brilliant. Your mom must be glad to have such a talented song. ;)
I'm downloading it now. Keep it up! :D
Honestly I cant really judge this the way I want to cause it was a gift so, here's what i think in a nutshell. The intro could be a bit shorter and sounds a little clashy, and it could use some variation between 3:40 to around 4:05, id be more exact but I have to fight with the player, otherwise good piece, has some potential for some great vocals to be added if you got the chance.
On a side note: what did you use to put this together?
Cakewalk SONAR for recording and mixing.
FL Studio for the drums and synths. :) (best sequencer ever)
And it's not really an intro, more like part 1 of the song.
And yeah, it does feel kinda empty without vocals..
This is good!
Nice job. Good song. Your mom is glad I supose ;)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.