EDIT; I guess i was over excited to put this on NG..
i see the bass is way to high not only, coz the dub doesnt fit here :P
i changed the dub, and its going great ;)
A sort of demo i created in 1 hour(its an intro for my next goal :P)
the mastering shows i improved allot!
I hope this is going to be WAY bigger then everything else i posted on NG :D
Again i dont know if my kick is TOO hard coz im always working with my headphone, so if you could be kind to tell me if its too hard ;)
Also other critique is welcome :D