not sure what to say. if you can get this solo into multply instruments, then maybe add a bit of percussion into it. it would be awesome. i'm still checking up on your songs from time to time. this is pretty decent. just kind of repetive. just take what you have learned from making this piece and apply it to a song where there is going to be other instruments overlapping each other. it will work i'm sure. i'll be looking forward to your next song. Kudos!! :)
Needs a LOT of work
That's an okay idea you have there but since there's very little development and that you only use whole notes and half notes (with the exception of the section with the staccato), it gets very boring after a while. The ending doesn't use a proper cadence. And I don't think it's possible to play this on a solo violin, since violins are generally built to play only one unharmonized line of melody.
Overall unextraordinary and premature.
I'm still just experimenting, trying out different ways of making music with a computer program. Most of all I'm trying to express myself, not bind myself to how other people think the music should be played. You've made me realise this, and for that I thank you.
Also, thanks for taking the time and to effort to write your comment. I appreciate it.
pretty good but..
Next time i think you had better go with multiple instruments.
Have you listened to some of my previous Works that did feature multiple instruments? With this, I was actually trying a new approach since the previous ones were generally not really found to be good. So I wouldn't know if you'd like multiple instruments in the future better. If you would, then that's great, but I don't know what I'll do after this just yet. Anyway, thanks for your review.