I don't know what [insert incredibly explicit name here] voted 0 right off the bat on this song, but you didn't deserve that.
It's not remarkable in any way, but it certainly is not BAD.
Unfortunately, I can't really give much input as far as improving it goes. It's really not bad at all, though. I was jsut reviewing to let you know it's not shit like some jerks seem to be rating it.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.