Yeah, I hate it when people are negative without feedback too. Hope you can get some more feedback.
This piece of music is far from bad, it's just not that close to excellent either.
It's repetitive... which CAN be done well, but it's also got an unoriginal chord progression. Pretty much four notes, in a familiar pattern, repeated over drums and other sounds.
If you look at, let's say ParagonX9's 'Chaoz Impact' (ID: 152047), it is very repetitive, but it's ALSO really unusual - and people don't mind listening to the same thing over and over again because of that.
What might have helped is if you had have added another melody/chord progression to mix things up. Or had a bit in the middle where it changes tone for a little bit, and then comes back with your main chord progression again (there's a name for that, but I can't remember it).
I know I'm using another example that isn't really your style, but in 'Vain Star' by Cycerin (ID: 112527), which is another repetitive song. At about 2:04, the music suddenly changes pace - it gives people a bit of a break - and then when it launches back into the main bit about twenty seconds later, it makes it so much better.
One last thing I'll try and comment only briefly on, is what feel is your song trying to achieve? What are people going to imagine to it? This song isn't quite suited to action... nor is it really dance, mystery, horror or... you know - anything in particular. In future I'd think about what, exactly, your music is aiming for. Otherwise it just ends up a bit flat, and a bit of everything.
Just a few ideas for you. And yeah, I hate it when people are negative without feedback too. I hope you start getting some more.
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