Hmm
Some of the chords isn't right, the beat is better then ur other song..
the lead at 0:27 is very weird man, but just keep this up! one day u will be rocking newgrounds!
Helth
4/5
Just tell if u need any help with fl studio okay?
Author Comments
This is my very first song, I've worked on it for a goodwhile, but I am not entirely happy with it. So please be a critic and help me get better. It is not too long, but anyways thanks for listening and I hope you like it!
-TehRave
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