i really feel like
once you really get to know the ins and outs of the software you use, youll really get going with music.
as long as you finetune and dont keep things fresh within a song like you did here, i think your writing is pretty good.
try making more glitchy drums in a track like this to keep the drums more interesting, which if you have flstudio, should be easy.
google glitch music if you dont know what that is.
I freaking love it.
It's unique and it's calming.
You can bet it's going onto my mp3 player.
wow, thanks a lot, this is probably the first good review ive ever gotten on a song, heh thanks