Why does this have such a low score?
Yeah, I know why. It's too jazzy, too unstructured and it doesn't seem to offer much. But I like it. It's obvious you were just messing around, but I think that's fine. And just because it's unconventional doesn't mean it's not any good.
I mean you have a really cool beat here. And I can't really say that I find the musical aspect that bad either... though I can understand why others might disagree. Most people don't really care for jazz or funk.