This composition really picks up towards the halfway mark, when both hands start really working around the theme and melody. All in all, it is a good 'working around', and an admirable effort. I must say, the minimalist intro gave me my misgivings, but in the scope of the whole song it works very nicely.
You did a good job on this one.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.