That's a pretty weird request you got here, but i think you really did a great job ^^
But i do have some points of criticism. The beginning with the jungle sounds is really soft and i think you could turn it up. Also, that thunder strike should be louder than it is now and maybe you could fade the techno beat in halfway through the thunderstrike... if you know what i mean :P
Let me explain. The ''-'' represents the thunder strike and the ''_'' represents the techno beat.
And the techno beat should fade in. I think :P
The beat itself is pretty good and when more stuff is added to it it sounds really nice. The voice however, is pretty low :P If you didn't put lyrics in your description i never could've guessed what you were saying.
And then, like you said, a whole new song starts :P
I really like the lullaby. It has a really nice beat and that piano is just amazing. The sounds itself is great and also what it is playing is beautiful.
Now, the things i'm about to say are completely my own opinion. And i'm talking about the outro.
I really don't like it when an outro is just fading out. It just doesn't give me the feeling that the song is really complete. What i would've done is a crash under that piano note at 02:57 and then echo the crash out, not just continueing the beat and fading it out. But again, that's my personal preference.
Well, i hope my review is somewhat helpful, and if not, i hope you enjoyed reading it :P
all of those points were very valid, and I will have fun implementing them
I have something to say...
Read the advice that I give to you for the remixes below:
When you're about to submit the remixes about my videos, don't put the (_RGH_) thing you alwas put in your submissions, but don't put it in my videos' remixes you're doing now because I'm making albums that are the same title of my videos, so don't put the (_RGH_) thing so the titles of the songs and their albums are alike when I download this and put them in an album with the same name of the songs. Remember, the songs need to be the Industrial genre because the videos that I uploaded for you to remix them are about constructions. Sorry, I wrote way too much.
Thanks for clearing things up.
I'll have your industrial construction worker's song done latet this week...