Not a bad little trance song, good progression throughout and solid melodies.
Main complaints are in the percussion - the drums are somewhat wishy-washy, which means the track isn't carrying a very strong beat. The lead on top also sounds very thin, and could be EQ'd out so it stands more out over the percussion. Also, kill or rework that crash cymbal - it feels REALLY tacked on.
The rhythmic lead also, in my opinion, sounds a bit too much like the melody lead.
Nice delay setup on your melody there.
Also the track lacks any sort of bass... Perhaps that is why it feels so thin?
yeah. I don't know the reason, but this track doesn't sound very powerfull. At first I used another drums but in my opinion they were too hard. I didn't wanted to create a har trance version (like axel coon's version of this track) but you're probably right when you point out that something is missing that makes the song look thin
to elivatory for me. eeds mor than just [synthisizer ]( i do not know how to speel that word.). add some bass, a guiter, and maybe some drums.
Not my best work