Nice vocals, but...
It was pretty good vocals, but I didn't think much of the song itself, I think if you had a faster paced song it would sound better. It just sounded very generic for some reason, but I think you could get better.
The drumming near the end (near the 3:00 mark) sounded a little too tinny, but I don't really know anything about drums (or anything about making music, for that matter). Anyways, it can only get better from here. Like I said, if you had some fast guitar and drums, it would sound really cool.
Keep it REAL Muthafuckas! dont stop ROCKIN
thIS was AWEsome.