This song is not yet completed.. but i wanted to dhare this song so much that i wanted to sumbit it as justa preveiw! Please write a reveiw if u want me too add anything too it.
more variety
I really like it, but it needs more variety. Like i have mentioned before, i have no knowledge on how to make Industrial music, so i can't suggest anything that would help. I can only point out the problems.
5/10 (because it's unfinished)
4/5 (because of the stated problem)
Yes, I agree. It does need a bit more variety.
Needs more dynamic work especially, but nice.
Dynamics: The contrasting volumes and contrasting drive of a song. Music has to go somewhere, even if it's electronic-based. Try different things.
-Intro: Great! Simple, but effective.
-Getting into it: nice fill to come into the next idea, but put small variations in between for more contrast and fun.
-Ending: a good transition point. I like the contrast it gave.
Style: Well, I'm a sucker for noise-electronica. However, I think it could be more sporatic and crazy. NOT LOUD AND MORE GRITTY. More crazy fills, more glitch effects, etc. Put those in!
Mixing: I like the distortedness, really nice. Perhaps a more driving bass drum would be interesting XD
Overall: Sweet, but experiment and have some fun with it. It's kinda straight-forward. Play this tune with more variation and effects/fills that catch the ear, and this groovin' gold.
-ImperfectDisciple
Why thank you for the constructive criticism! I shall use it wisely!
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Pivvot 
