4/5

Beautiful job! I really like this! However, my only gripe with it is the sound used from the beginning throughout. I can't explain it, only that I've heard it before using FL Studio. It's one of the preset sounds, I believe. It is heard the first time at 0:07. I think that it should be removed completely, and a new effect put in. That's just my opinion, though. It don't matter much. Thanks for the listen, though! Awesome beat! Just start tying your music together in a theory, and you'll be getting somewhere! Anyhow, take care of yourself, friendo!

Your friend,
Ka'eo

this is more like ambient lol

not bad, i think this would be better off as techno though. and if at about 30 seconds you kicked it off into a techno/trance thingy it would be awesome

Potential

So much potential especially in the beginning, you shuold really run with this.