When you fix the slice.
everything has been said already aout this song so i have nothing else to add. Stillyou should something about the slice issue ;)
Try changing the time signature to 4/3
Add Daviecrocker196 to your aim, I'll send you a midi I made of the melody, then you can try again XD
Loved it but...
There are only two things that are keeping this song from being perfect! This song is awsome and you did a great job remixing it. The begining is a little long but thats not much of a problem I just wish there was no skipping and it would be perfect!
Otherwise great job keep it up!
You should have taken a little more time.
All you would have needed to do to make this at the least a somewhat enjoyable, would have been to open audacity and remove the silences.
Your lack of effort made this possibly great song a unbearable piss bucket of great sounds. It is like staring at the most beautiful sunset you have ever seen only to have some fat fucker stand in front of it every 20 seconds with his ass crack 4 feet from your face as he bends down to grab another soda.
This could have been a great track, but you held it back.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.