makes me think at an undead dungeon thing ^^ anyway, i suggest to either erase the beeping noise, or take something more smooth instead.
work on ^^
The main problem I had with it was the beep. It gets really annoying pretty quickly. It works for the intro, but I would drop it sooner. Other than that, the song is decent. I feel like it is lacking some substance in the first minute. Maybe add a little more bass.
Im debating whether to throw in a sub kick, and i know what your talking about with the first minute. I've spent two days trying to figure out how to tweak it but nothing satisfying. So far i've spent a week on assembling this
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