this was pretty dang good. i feel like there could be more in the center before you have that big climax at the end.
also, the beats were decent. I wish i could have heard a couple more real hardcore techno beats, but i liked it.
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thanks dude. yeah, i've expanded it and added another section, i'm gonna post it again soon.
btw leet is teh suxxors
Not bad for first attempt
This is pretty good if it's one of your first attempts! If it intrests you here is what I think:
-Speed up the tempo - good techno is normally fast - unless you have really rich patterns - this song would be better faster.
-stick with the main pattern longer. You start out good with a strong electronic pattern, then you ditch it for a pretty cheezy synth beat (reminded me of elevator music)
But listen, it's really a good try. And of course feel free to dismiss my opinion lol
it's not like I've not been acused of having bad taste before.
wow, thanks! yeah, i actually made another version of this soon after reading your review, and added in some more hardcore techno beats that really pump it up.
thanks for the review!