This isn't metal!!!
But it was good anyway. but then, I don't think you give a fuck what I say.
Not my style of metal, but I think it was pretty fucking cool. Couldn't decide wether it was metal or punk, because it had its heavy parts then its punk parts... Anyway, good quality and excellent effort means 5/5!
You need to re-think what genre you are.
This is not Metal, I'm sorry.
It's not my kind of music either, but since I'm the kind of guy who can appreciate music for what it is, here we go:
The drum beat here is very stereotypical of a "Mainstream" punk band (i.e. Green Day, Blink 182) The guitar work has some OKAY chord progression, but one thing you guys could use is a bit more rhythm oriented. Guitar riffs are what get me into a song, and they have to be somewhat complicated, but overall this is a decent song, that being said by a guy..(I like the double bass near the end, that was very nice)..who doesn't really listen to this kind of music.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.