Wow, I love this man... I am going to use this as my ring tone now.
it ok bit wierd
The song started really well, but, like TruthAngel said, it does get very repetitive. I know it is just a start and you are going to add, but just some advice.
It's a good beginning
But be careful at how much you keep a piece, from 0:58 it went kinda repetitive.
Also try to add some overloops, this will improve your song greatly.