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Uploaded
Apr 27, 2009 | 12:19 PM EDT
File Info
Song
4 MB
2 min 57 sec
Score
4.14 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 4.14 / 5 stars
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1,192 Plays | 68 Downloads
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Genres:
Easy Listening - Classical
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Author Comments

hey NG! Back again and i know i'm not that good at using chords. And please if you're going to Zero bomb it, leave a review and tell me why. I'm very open to criticism. I'm only thirteen and i threw this together while sitting outside. It's a piece that for emphasizes peace and tranquility. This relaxes me so i hope you like it!

Reviews


dogstar4goddogstar4god

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

not bad.

sounds a lot like what i was doing when I was 13. I have since stopped attempting composing. I have taken 2 semesters of theory though.

sounds a bit like random notes thrown together.
normally, in a piano piece, the main melody is in the treble end, and the bass end has half notes. unless you're bringing out full chords.
and try and stay away from the 5ths... makes it sound Asian.
use more 3rd's and 6ths.

you can bring countermelodies back if you have more going on, more depth. otherwise, you can't hear the main melody.

(violinist of 10 years. took piano for 6.)


lvl5drummer responds:

thanks for the review. I dont know why people keep telling me to watch my chords, i didnt use any. and yeah i know about the treble with the melody. although i have to ask, why did you stop composing? although thanks for the review. I also suggest checking out my other piece, Aery. It's my new one.

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RedHatCoreRedHatCore

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

good stuff

The sound quality could be improved a bit, but, the parts are good. It seems to me like this is a basic theory chords+passing-tones type thing.

9/10 opinion
5/5 quality



whatever27whatever27

Rated 5 / 5 stars

It sucks. just kidding.

yeah you know. its pretty good. a little repetitive and boring at times but still a pleasant piece.


lvl5drummer responds:

yeah, i did though in arepeat in there somewhere. butmy spacebaris sticking so sorry about the typos

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JeffHeimJeffHeim

Rated 3 / 5 stars

alright not bad, some things to address:

when I was in 8th grade I remember doing some similar music like this on piano for fun. This piece is very simple and I can hear some motivic material, including dialogue between the left hand and right hand, trills, and a recurrence of that melody. I thought the parallel 5ths were interesting, but I'm not sure what your intentions were in writing this piece. It lacks structure and development. The dynamics are monotonous and the melody/chords imply a piece of music of the baroque or classical period but it doesn't follow any of the rules. I would recommend reading up on some music theory/voice leading textbooks. I enjoyed the piece, but it's very important to be aware of which rhealm of classical music you're entering.


lvl5drummer responds:

okay thank you. i just walked outside on a sunny saturday morning and heard this in my head. i quickly wrote it down and continued to write the piece. i appreciate the reviews!

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