Crisis this is beast dude. it's got a good metalish suspense in it. it's not HEAVY metal, but in my personal opinion, it's still metal enough. good job. XP
Needs to be heavier for me. The end just sort of stops too. The bass guitar needed to be throughout most of the song or not there doing a solo.
It's on par with mine, man.
Try doing faster metal, and maybe use a song you really like that would sound good as metal, which is what I did with Dragostea din Tei Metalic.
I phail at remixes.
It needs work
I'll point out afew things about this track
-The Guitar: The tone was not bad at all (Was the beginning vst?). The riffs, however, were boring and kind of repetitive. And it's very noticable that you changed the pitch around 1:20.
-The Drums: They really sound like plain synth drum loops, which makes this even more of a kinda metal - techno blend, which isn't of much interest.
So all in all, work on making up riffs and how you lay them out, and for drums please use something other than synth drum loops.
It WAS my first attempt, :P