Intro too slow
The intro is nice, but too slow, empty and long. Also, the synth you have there seems to override the other ones a bit... but i'm on laptop speakers so I won't judge on that. The drums are getting better on this one, your melodies are now enjoyable to listen to, although I'm not sure if they're earworm material quite yet. This song is still, unfortunately, extremely repetative (and really long). It'dork better if you have more stuff going on. It's _boring_. Good trance is repetative and NOT BORING, which is very difficult to do, which is why people get paid money to do it :P Try working more towards that.