Ok, i listened to your entire song, and i liked it :D
The singing is incredible, keep doing that man!
However, like all songs, if you have singing, you have to find a way to get the instruments to work in harmony with the vocals, not against it. I think the instruments are just against it a little bit. So i suggest going back real quick, and lowering the instruments down by a bit or something.
Also the panning at 1:45 or so, was kinda bizarre lol.
Anyway, keep doing the singing, I love it! And I know you just wanted to upload, but hey! Its uploaded, so fix it up now :D