hmm not bad.
you got potetial but. I would recomand to do a 2step kick. Also you should try to give your song more variation. Try to google music theory you might find some usefull information there.
And believe me i have to work on these problems myself. ;)
But dont give up on music!
Thanks for the input! I know I really should put more time into my songs, but sadly most of them usually don't get more than a few hours of work haha, I just lose focus to easily. But I'll be sure to do some reading up on it :)