Bland. No Direction.
Very plain. Very repetitive and boring. The harmonic language did not make any sense and there did not seem to be any direction for the music. The original bass line also faded out for some reason to let in a a strange background "noise" that did not fit the original feel of the piece. I'm sorry :(.
Why apologise? You tell me the issue with my music, and I learn from the mistakes that I make.
I understand where you're coming from. I never noticed this before, to be honest. I'll take note. Thank you kindly.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.