The intro was much too long, it should have stopped at about 0:05. I like how the melody was introduced though. Very mellow. Percussion needs to be fixed. It sounds very artificial, and the bad patterns take away from the softness of the melody. Also, the synth that only has two notes gets very annoying.
When I saw the title I imagined something more hectic. Oh well. The song was okay, and if you had to change only one thing, I would change the percussion.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.