Ahhhh, The sweet sound of FL.
Ok, this song is far from perfect, but also far from disaster. A few things,
1st: The Melody was absoloutly fantastic, loved every second of it.
2nd: The claps (i think they were claps) just didnt fit. The synths are swing, and the claps are straight. They dot blend. I have had always had problems with swing music. So i suggest for the finished product make the song straight, not swing.
3rd, The synths you added when the claps came in were i thought to be a bit random. They didnt really fit the melody that was playing, and i gues sort off ruined that bit.
4th: Just a tip for the finished product, You badly need drums. This is a song in need of drums. But dont go Righty then. i'll make one pattern and that will be my beat for the whole thing. NononononononononoNO! You need at least 3 different drum patterns in your piece to make it sound creative. Also for the drums, for a song like this, i think you should look at Fl's Vintage pack (Packs > Vintage) or FL DrumSynth Live for this song.
Well, like i said, its far from perfect, but if you work on these things, it will be musch closer, i can assure you that.
been a while so yes I would see my mishaps and fix them in time...a lot of time. But yeah thanks for review and help. I'll be sure to work on it slowly and get it done right.
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