I'm kind of a nut for your songs Cryo, I can't lie.
When you partner skill and talent with passion, expect a masterpiece.
That is what you have here. It's simple, yet complex in certain areas. It could be overly complicated but it isn't, and as far as I'm concerned half of the song's quality is measured in what it isn't.
I can tell you put forth good effort in this song, but that doesn't mean there isn't room for improvement...
just keep practicing your skills, make lots of music, and you'll be a master composer in no time.
Love of Polka Holds Strong
It's mostly my love of the polka which makes me smile, though I think the bass could have been a little heavier, and other vbits of sound could have filled in the spaces of silence. Or maybe a change to the main insturments? Some sounds turn me off at times.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.