Helll yeah man
NICE work man! This is greezy stuff man@!! Keep up tha ILL Flow man.
Author Comments
think it's time for a new track, ain't it?
i've set my lines to pass
poisonous gas attacks
Choke up the mass
Show me what you made of
stick up some ass
you could say I made love
Fact is ya shit is fucked with when its on
shits a rubber glove
So when yall get ripped
call it a gift
Son cuz god's givin it
thank me
if you ain't feelin it
Ma bars r like water boarding
Every1's cool with it pouring
I don't kill any1 you really knew
And if I did you wouldn't know
So don't wear it
if its not ya shoe
you stepped into
Stay out of it boy,
leave just go
switch I's say review
drop a zero
prolly 2
in the end I aint a cross
no cuts to attend
nowhere near you
dude time spent
try n pretend
a wound b4 it sent
a BN to heal dead son Amen
platformer embalmer
Killin these levels
these words are the devils
say this verse is a curse
But shit never settles
So when you got shit to say
spit the other way
shit's called pay back like rentals
Broken-Needle responds:
thanks a lot man, I wouldn't be getting better at this pace without you man, lol put more beats up, I'm running very low
Keep it pimpin'
BN out
Atta boy!
This is some wicked sh*t here man. The intro is great and the flow is pretty tight. There were a few pronouciation/grammar issues, but nothing too major. I like the line "platformer embalmer, killin these levels" is that a game reference? To think, a month ago I had trouble listening to your music, now you're worthy of the Ipod. Great progress man, peace
Broken-Needle responds:
told you battling is great, lol and anything u might think the lines mean they mean that and more. grammar is there for a reason aswell,
Keep it pimpin'
BN out
fucking bn
Ma bars r like water boarding
Every1's cool with it pouring
that was all i needed to here man. heres a fucking 10 lmao
-RMP
P.S. you should've replaced "bars" with "flow". i think it wouldve match the theme a lil better. but either way that was a hot line
Broken-Needle responds:
some lines have common knowledge assumptions, plus water boarding occurs to prisoners of war, lol believe me I choose my words wisely,
Keep it pimpin'
BN out
Allright
As I told you on AIM, this is your best flow yet on this site. Good work
Broken-Needle responds:
lol, thanks
AYOOOOOOOO!!!!!
definitely the best track from you by far! your flow is getting better and better with each track you're doin! *sniff* im proud of ju mang!!! *cry* SO PROUD!!!!!!!
Broken-Needle responds:
yay I made daddy proud=D lmao, thanks man
Credits & Info
- Listens
- 737
- Downloads
- 46
- Votes
- 6
- Score
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4.71 / 5.00
- Uploaded
- Apr 22, 2009
- 9:47 PM EDT
- Genre
- Hip Hop - Modern
- File Info
- Song
- 1.9 MB
- 2 min 7 sec
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