Interesting Concept...

I'm excited for the final version of this.

As demos go, this is pretty typical. It obviously isn't finished, so I don't want to be too harsh in my review.

I like the different sounds you are using. They all fit pretty well with the style and purpose of this song. But I really think you need to intertwine them more. You have a nice selection of synths, you just need to layer them now.

The kick is pretty impressive. It is so punchy and in your face, which is really good for this style. I like the kick a lot, so definitely keep it.

You could do more with the percussion, but I'm betting that you are planning that anyways. So just make sure to add and vary the percussion a bit.

Also, this needs a thick and rich bass line. Right now, you don't have one. So go make one. :-D

Overall though, I like what you have started here. I'm excited for the final version, so definitely let me know when you have posted it.

4/5 and 7/10 overall.

-Gravey-