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Apr 22, 2009 | 3:12 PM EDT
File Info
1.3 MB
1 min 27 sec
2.84 / 5.00

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Rated 2.84 / 5 stars
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686 Plays | 52 Downloads
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Metal, Rock - Pop

Author Comments

a short little song i've been working on. from experience, i'm going to assume the majority of you aren't going to like it much, but i like playing it so i thought i'd get some fairly anonymous feedback. reviews are greatly appreciated, good or bad.

i remember sunlight
caught in corvine hair
man the spring was rushing
through the open window
like starlight dancing
in the midnight air
arboreal green
and the gray of road

we look better in reflection
when the focus and attention's
on what we lost
what we miss

i remember tears
cried i let you down
the somber soundtrack
playing in the dark
your face was hidden
in a dark hair shroud
is this what the mean
by break your heart?

i know whose fault this is
his mind so scarred and skinned's
on what we lost
what we miss



Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

needs some work

so far it's sounds good though :) i like the chorus

TheLameSauce responds:

yea, i pretty much wrote it yesterday. i could probably play a little smoother as i think the transition from chorus to second verse is a little sloppy. thanks for the review though.