its been a while man, long time no see
kicks are nice, they got bunch a bass to them, mabye too much, mabye they need a little more treble, for punch
kinda repetitive, and dude its doin weird stuff, like the volems are just droppin down at spots and its not really makin sense...
overall its pretty good, still could use some work, try playin around with other leads, give it some diversity, you know
Ye sounds pretty energetic and nice dude :D well done, you should at the beginning keep the progression of the volume going like from quiet to loud rather than at 10 seconds in having a dip because it confuses people like huh wheres the drop kinda thing, the beat is nice, the use of synth is very nice, i reckon you need to upgrade your strings or make them sound more realistic kinda thing, and just work on the structure to make sure that its progressive kinda thing. Just take these into consideration and good stuff mate, I like it :D
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