Sounds like a Beginner (=
I'm guessing your new to this stuff, I can tell by the heavy use of presets ^^ Thats what I used to do when I was a begginner.
Well first off, the melody is good, but it doesnt sound good without a good sound, and unfortunatly in my mind, these sounds are terrible, I along with many of the members here dislike The Slayer and I advise you find a good substitute ^^
Good for a first piece of work though! Try mucking around with the "Parametric EQ" or something Effect to change those rough presets into something that sounds professional and awesome!
Keep it up!
~Happy Music Making -Squll
Slayer just has relivence to my highscores in god knows howmany online games. I dont get out much, Thanks for the honesty. But i had little plans of 100% composition in my music untill i have 600$ to piss on licenses and other editor programs. For the most part, im just making things so i remeber what to do later.