Your panning is a bit extreme, and I wouldn't rely ony Sytrus to come up with a melody for you.
Could have been alot better
This could have been alot better, Your arp was ok, Would have done you good to add a more complex sort of bass to go with it, it seemed very plain, Then also if you would have played with some LFO's on your Instrument, like cutoff, and other stuff you could have done some nice automation effects.
If you need help PM me and we'll have a chat on an IM or some thing
You have FL?
Yea i have FL8. I dont really have an IM program really... i just use email. My email is email@example.com
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.