Good

This pretty good but it is the same thing over and over again. If you add a whole other part that changes a lot but keep the song the same except for adding the other part.

Dance

Only thing i can do to this song! =D

rave

dude take this to a rave party that would be sweet.

i like it lots =D

Im gonna use it at my sweet rave party thanks =D "dont worry Ill give you full credit" ahaha

Needs more

Needs a better pattern. What you got is a very simple repentant. It has REALLY good mixing, but it needs more ...sounds? The lead part, especially. It seems you made the lead constantly repeat and just built the base onto it. Try to improve it maybe?