like Gnomes going to BAttle!
You know, I like this more than i thought I might, cool sound effect, a couple good riffs that seem to tie in nicely right at the end. It's a little slow to start, one thing to consider, rests - space - goes a long away. Pretty cool.
Thanks a bunch for the advice its the first i've got so far:P
I agree about the intro, it starts kinda slow, and i will definetly start using rests more often.
Overall thanks for the advice.